On A Midwinter's Eve

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By Kyle J. K.

About the poem

I wrote this poem last winter, upon trying out some new styles of image language, while reflecting on the beauty of the last months of the year with a feeling of nostalgia for the wane of life and light amid the cold and dreary days of December. My hope was to convey a mood that instills a sense for the absence of things remembered fondly, creating an impression of the loneliness perceived from the loss of things that have been. I have a great love for image poetry, and a lot of my writing tends toward that direction; while this poem features fairly complex imagery, I think that if you bear with me, and take the time to sift through the words and rhyme, you'll be pleasantly surprised. Thanks! 

On A Midwinter's Eve

The watches of the evening cold

Descend upon the candled den;

The dark-lit room aflood of gold

Her latticed window glistens then,

 

Its crystal pane with frostwork crown'd,

Mosaicked-amber rime aglow;

In shadows low, the frozen ground

Outside is whisked with falling snow.

 

Down yon, the dooryard's wintered wall,

All trellised white with hawthorn locks

And hoarfrost wreaths of evenfall,

Farewells the summer hollyhocks.

 

The garden-court, its snow-banked loam

The alder green bides cold and bare,

Where, oft, in springtide, she may roam –

Now none take pause to wander there.

 

The rain-glazed road, where street-lamps once

The azure way, in gloaming hour,

Shone pale-gold in autumn months,

Lies dark and still 'neath twilight's lour.

 

And, weeping o'er the moon-gleamed white,

The frore-lad'n yew, of wither'd withes,

Up, on the moors, a mist-veiled light

Unshrouds thro' silver-tresséd shives.

 

Tho' rarely e'er should any know

Such subtle beauties as are these –

For, seldom there I stray to go,

Out, from my door, 'mong th' glittering trees –

 

Yet, when the dying hearth I leave,

From high, where sleeps the candled den,

To saunter, hushed, the snowy eve,

'Tis dreams of yore that warm me then.

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Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

Dross. Haha, j/k I really love the first poem. I had forgotten how rad the imagery is. You should break up the poems though, and publish each as individual hubs.

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Julie-Ann Amos Level 1 Commenter 3 years ago

I love these. No 1 puts me in mind of "The Love Song of Alfred J Prufrock" - my favourite poem ever.

Yes publish as individual poems (it's not too late).

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Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

Yeah, that was a good swap, changing it to just 1 poem instead. You rock.

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Thank you for your comments and advice. I truly appreciate your encouragement! :) I took your suggestion, and divided my posts into separate, individual hubs, with one entry per, which I will be doing from this point forward, now that I know how to navigate HubPages a little better.

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Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

We just read this poem again. It's awesome. More!

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Cris A 3 years ago

another poet who's good at rhyming! do you mind if i copy all the last words of each line and use them in mine? LOL thanks for sharing, it's a beauty :D

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Haha, wow, thanks, Cris! Ironically, I was just about to become your fan myself! :) I really appreciate your encouraging words of praise.. thanks for reading!

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Uriel Level 3 Commenter 3 years ago

WOW! this is really good man! your friend on the forum was right LOL :D:D:D.. i guess am hanging out here for a while maybe ill learn some more...interesting!

thumbs up!

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Hey, thanks, Uriel! You are very gracious. :) Thanks for reading! I haven't posted in a little while, but I'll be sure to put up more poetry in the near future, as soon as I'm done revising. Hope you enjoy browsing my stuff!

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Uriel Level 3 Commenter 3 years ago

well, yeh i some how found my way AGAIN TO ur hub and i have to say though this is like the third time i read it (blushing) can't seem not feel surprised and intrigued with the words and style :D ... keep up the great work and dont ever leave hubpages :P regards to all

ps: i tend to read nice stuff again and again though this might sound weird to some , but to see if rereading it brings new thoughts and feelings. thanks again for sharing

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Well, thank you, Uriel! I'm very flattered by your comments. I don't think it the least bit strange that you enjoy rereading poems that are memorable to you - I do the same all the time. :) I'm so glad you could find as much interest in one of mine!

I haven't had the time to post a new hub in several weeks, but your words have inspired me to finish some of my works-in-progress, so that I can share them with you and others on here. Thanks again!

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frogyfish Level 6 Commenter 3 years ago

Kyle J K, I think you succeeded so beautifully in portraying 'absence' but you made it ok with your last lines. Thanks! I am joining your hubclub now too.

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Thank you, frogyfish! I appreciate your kind praise. I haven't been on Hubpages in a while - I just don't have the time these days; but, receiving such comments on occasion certainly lifts my spirits. :)

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