On A Midwinter's Eve
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About the poem
I wrote this poem last winter, upon trying out some new styles of image language, while reflecting on the beauty of the last months of the year with a feeling of nostalgia for the wane of life and light amid the cold and dreary days of December. My hope was to convey a mood that instills a sense for the absence of things remembered fondly, creating an impression of the loneliness perceived from the loss of things that have been. I have a great love for image poetry, and a lot of my writing tends toward that direction; while this poem features fairly complex imagery, I think that if you bear with me, and take the time to sift through the words and rhyme, you'll be pleasantly surprised. Thanks!
On A Midwinter's Eve
The watches of the evening cold
Descend upon the candled den;
The dark-lit room aflood of gold
Her latticed window glistens then,
Its crystal pane with frostwork crown'd,
Mosaicked-amber rime aglow;
In shadows low, the frozen ground
Outside is whisked with falling snow.
Down yon, the dooryard's wintered wall,
All trellised white with hawthorn locks
And hoarfrost wreaths of evenfall,
Farewells the summer hollyhocks.
The garden-court, its snow-banked loam
The alder green bides cold and bare,
Where, oft, in springtide, she may roam –
Now none take pause to wander there.
The rain-glazed road, where street-lamps once
The azure way, in gloaming hour,
Shone pale-gold in autumn months,
Lies dark and still 'neath twilight's lour.
And, weeping o'er the moon-gleamed white,
The frore-lad'n yew, of wither'd withes,
Up, on the moors, a mist-veiled light
Unshrouds thro' silver-tresséd shives.
Tho' rarely e'er should any know
Such subtle beauties as are these –
For, seldom there I stray to go,
Out, from my door, 'mong th' glittering trees –
Yet, when the dying hearth I leave,
From high, where sleeps the candled den,
To saunter, hushed, the snowy eve,
'Tis dreams of yore that warm me then.
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I love these. No 1 puts me in mind of "The Love Song of Alfred J Prufrock" - my favourite poem ever.
Yes publish as individual poems (it's not too late).
Yeah, that was a good swap, changing it to just 1 poem instead. You rock.
We just read this poem again. It's awesome. More!
another poet who's good at rhyming! do you mind if i copy all the last words of each line and use them in mine? LOL thanks for sharing, it's a beauty :D
WOW! this is really good man! your friend on the forum was right LOL :D:D:D.. i guess am hanging out here for a while maybe ill learn some more...interesting!
thumbs up!
well, yeh i some how found my way AGAIN TO ur hub and i have to say though this is like the third time i read it (blushing) can't seem not feel surprised and intrigued with the words and style :D ... keep up the great work and dont ever leave hubpages :P regards to all
ps: i tend to read nice stuff again and again though this might sound weird to some , but to see if rereading it brings new thoughts and feelings. thanks again for sharing
Kyle J K, I think you succeeded so beautifully in portraying 'absence' but you made it ok with your last lines. Thanks! I am joining your hubclub now too.













Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago
Dross. Haha, j/k I really love the first poem. I had forgotten how rad the imagery is. You should break up the poems though, and publish each as individual hubs.