Vignette: Blackberry Daydream

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By Kyle J. K.

About the vignette

In the fall, I had made a habit of visiting a local ranch produce market, where they sold fresh berries for 50 cents a basket; I enjoyed buying them by the pound and freezing them for a cheap sweet treat. I was eating up my treasure of blackberries one evening last November, and I began to imagine the berry patch they must have come from, and wondered if any had been overlooked, and left on the vine to freeze through the winter. It was a nice distraction of a daydream from the reality of the emotional stress in those days which were so troubling to me. I hope it's a nice little respite for you as well. Thanks!

Blackberry Daydream

These blackberries, whose stains smatter over stickery pricks of charred-umber brambles, in a month or so will be frozen-hard with glitter-frost, split open clean, dripping tears of icy jam in wilted patches of summer fruit and brush scrawled in withered strains across perennial garden-beds.

Today, in wane, they blister in black-purple bunches, tangled under shades of old-autumn woodsy withing, grown wild and long-due for picking; their tart-seedy sweet pulp spreads over thorn and dust, painting dark the rusty earth, while a heavy sky readies to rain.

This vibrant wine-fruit tempts more than what bees and dragonflies hover close to its buzzing scent; for, it is all I can consider in this moment. Life beyond the berry patch is not as simple and beautiful most days.

Comments

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Cris A 3 years ago

Even your prose reads like poetry. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing :D

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Wow, Cris.. you always have the best encouraging comments. :) Thanks!

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Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

Yes! This is beautiful writing. The ending is perfect.

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coffeesnob Level 1 Commenter 3 years ago

Love it!

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frogyfish Level 6 Commenter 3 years ago

You've got beautiful thoughts expressed so I 'feel' them. Thanks.

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 3 years ago

Thank you, Frogyfish! That is my goal; so I'm glad you found something you could connect with.

Heidi 2 years ago

I like that it is beautiful and in plain english so I don't need a dictionary to rip it apart and then say ahhh.

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Kyle J. K. Hub Author 2 years ago

Why, thank you, Heidi. While I do love to relish the extensive richness of words available to the English language, sometimes fresh simplicity is in order for the most beautiful things.

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